marlene mountain
other-line sequences
late 1969

moon puddle sequence

(1)

a puddle
   and tonight
       no moon

(2)

full moon
   looking
      about for water

(3)

no moon
    no water
        the evening

(4)

suddenly
    the moon
        going back to the puddle

(5)

full moon
    following
         moon puddles

(6)

walking in circles
    keeping up
         with the moon

(7)

from puddle
    to puddle
        the moon

(8)

moon watching
    falling into a puddle
         seeing the moon

note
first sequence
[interest in theme and variations as in concurrent paintings]

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